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1. She looks like 2 feet tall... Or about 0,5 meters if New Zealand uses the metric system.
2. Big bosses should have an appearance that gives off an impact on the viewer. The eyes are a very good tool for this. Make them creepy as shit and sinister as hell, easily put.
3. She shading's a little dull, as you mentioned yourself. Spice it up a little with more contrast. In general, the whole picture could do with some more contrast, yeah...
Now the good parts:
1. Awesome concept to have the eyes on the branches, and having her "real eyes", or at least their position, covered by the hair
2. The flowers give off a sense of psycopathic feeling to the creature: a flower-loving killing machine. Hard to describe...
3. She looks like she popped out of the ground! That's a good thing, cause things that pop out of the ground can startle people obnoxiously much, in lack of a better term.
4. May not be considered a "good" point to some (not even by me, though...), but if she makes it to the game she might be hit by Rule 34 easier than you might thing
Hmm, guess I could work on the eyes.. I did them first, so they look kind of bad. >_<
Contrast is hard.. I'll fiddle with the saturation and see if I can improve it..
Yup!
She does, she can erupt from anywhere
Haha, I didn't even think about that.. At least her lower half is stuck in the ground, I guess.. XDDDD
And thanks for that really long comment
Fiddle with the saturation and contrast settings, especially the contrast. The dark parts, especially the shading, might need a bit of darkening.
I hope that these negative parts aren't too overwhelming...
Witht he lower half stuck to the ground, Rule 34's power might be even more viscous... Just guess what people might do when they realize they can pretend her lower half is plainly buried, and not just non-existent and being a part of the ground... Beware...
Damnit, my shading is never dark enough!
Haha, it's not like you're saying 'this sucks, her anatomy's way off' or anything.
LIKE DUGTRIO D:
Put it in a separate layer and use effin' contrast, gurl! >.< It's like magic!
I guess so
CANNOT UNSEE >.< I have a slight feeling that you, as a yaoi-loving girl, doesn't mind seeing it though...
Also, just for future reference, we're talking about this one, one out of possibly many others, right?
XDDDD
What? I don't like the Dugtrio..? XD It's funny. And kind of disturbing..
"vi) you may use licensed brushes and textures, but you may not use third-party stock in your entry" that's all I found regarding brushes... Well, this line I also found 2 paragraphs below the former one: "Entrant may use licensed brushes and textures in the Work."
So what's keeping you?
It's hilarious, yes, but not something you'd like to be caught looking at when your parents enter your room...
HAHA
The computer is in the lounge, which sucks. Too many times has my dad walked past while there was something inappropriate on the page. Mostly from Failblog..