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UGHGHGHG I TRIED REALLY HARD WITH THIS ONE ;_; I've been doing an few hours each day for a while now.. It looks too plain.. And I'm just not going to say anymore. Because I am a cheerful Deviant. *strained smile*

ANYWAY
It's for the RIFT Create a Colossus contest. She's under the Life category. Just imagine, walking through the forest when THIS 10-STOREY HIGH MONSTER BURSTS OUT OF THE VINES IN FRONT OF YOU AND HITS YOU WITH HER BRANCHY-VINE ARMS :O Pretty freaky, hm?

A little about her- her eye sockets are empty. She sees with the eyes on her hands, and her vision is tinted green.
The vines growing along her arms glow, and they can grow poisonous-gas spewing flowers..
She only eats meat.

Please point out flaws that I can easily correct.. XD
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Here are the flaws:
1. She looks like 2 feet tall... Or about 0,5 meters if New Zealand uses the metric system.
2. Big bosses should have an appearance that gives off an impact on the viewer. The eyes are a very good tool for this. Make them creepy as shit and sinister as hell, easily put.
3. She shading's a little dull, as you mentioned yourself. Spice it up a little with more contrast. In general, the whole picture could do with some more contrast, yeah... ^^;

Now the good parts:
1. Awesome concept to have the eyes on the branches, and having her "real eyes", or at least their position, covered by the hair =D
2. The flowers give off a sense of psycopathic feeling to the creature: a flower-loving killing machine. Hard to describe...
3. She looks like she popped out of the ground! That's a good thing, cause things that pop out of the ground can startle people obnoxiously much, in lack of a better term.
4. May not be considered a "good" point to some (not even by me, though...), but if she makes it to the game she might be hit by Rule 34 easier than you might thing =D